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2013年9月21日雅思写作Task2真题解析附范文

Throughout the history, people dream to build a perfect society while they haven't agreed how the ideal society would be like.
What is the most important element for a perfect society? What can people do to achieve an ideal

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分段解析：
1. Introduction
1）背景信息：Various social problems have emerged together with the social development.
2）引出话题：With the wish to prevent the society from developing in the wrong path, people have never stopped discussing about what the destination of social development should be.

2.回答第一个问题：什么是构成理想社会的最重要因素
a.提出前人观点
关键词句推荐：A Utopian society has been believed to be what human beings should seek for. Without anything called the private property, people living in the Utopia are free from crimes, wars, starvation and oppression.
b.提出自己观点：理想社会应该是一个人人都有平等机会的社会。
关键词句推荐：However, in my personal opinion, people do not really need a society where they have nothing to fight for. Instead, the perfect society should offer everybody equal opportunities to make them what they are born to be.

3.回答第二个问题：如何建成理想社会
a. 合理的竞争制度
关键词句推荐：In order build an ideal society, proper competition system would be required. Such a system will make sure that the winners are only the most talented ones, instead of those with special background.
b. 一个为所有人服务的政府
关键词句推荐：For the sake of the effective operation of such a system, a fair and service-oriented government is essential. Such a government will make sure that all its policies benefit everybody in the society.

4. Conclusion
重申观点：In conclusion, an ideal society should offer freedom and equal rights to all its members