2013年3月23日雅思写作Task2真题解析附范文
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写作题目与分析

写作题目:

2013年3月23日雅思写作Task2真题解析附范文

Technological progress in the past century has its negative effect, despite its remarkable contribution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

写作题目分析:

科技进步对中国人来说是绝对的好事,例如生活水平的提高,交流的便捷,交通发达,娱乐多元等等。
但在英国和其他一些西方国家,人们会质疑科技的积极影响。自从工业革命以后环境日益恶化,能源面临枯竭;科技加快生产,也加速垃圾的产生;
人们的健康水平并没有随着医疗技术的提高而变得更健康,相反,亚健康的状况大范围存在;交流增加并没有增加人们之间关系的密切和融洽,反而疏远了彼此的感情...

第一段:开头段
题目转述,背景介绍引入法

第二段:论证科技进步的好处
1、生活水平的提高
2、交流的便捷
3、交通发达
4、医疗条件改善
5、娱乐多元化,电脑、手机等等

第三步:论证技术发展的弊端
1、环境污染
2、交通堵塞
3、资源枯竭
4、人类不如以前密切融洽,疏远了彼此的感情
写作参考范文

写作参考范文:

It is undeniable that technological advancement has made an unprecedented change in our human life in the last century. Nonetheless, its destructive impact on our society has also to be recognized. (形式主语+被动句)

In the 20th century, some significant inventions including jet planes, TV, cars, computers and telephones have shaped our modern life fundamentally. Long distance transportation becomes easier and increasing international communication in many aspects such as trade, cultures and technology expands our activity sphere and broadens our horizons. Our life expectancy is longer than ever before thanks to medical progress and some fatal diseases such as heart disease and breast cancer can be cured. Boosted productivity in industry and agriculture by automation has solved famine in many regions and improved our living standard dramatically. TV and the internet provide entertainments and information as well. (非谓语+对比句+并列句+被动句)

However, it has been widely realized that the benefits produced by technology do not come at no cost. The environment deterioration makes the earth less livable largely due to the overuse of fuel sources for energy production and traffic exhaust. Another contributor is the high efficiency of production which makes consumer goods so cheap that people throw away food or anything out of date or broken with little hesitation, but unfortunately it is this throw-away lifestyle that is responsible for the large amount of waste and meanwhile escalates the commodity production in turn. Overpopulation, as one consequence of the improved medical condition and better material life, has savagely deprived animals and plants of their habitats, damaging the balance of the nature and eco-sustainability. In spite of the medical progress, the public health ironically is not getting enhanced and the reason for this is modern sedentary lifestylewhich features the addiction to TV, the computer and the internet. (形式主语+非谓语+双重否定+对比句+定语从句+结果状语从句+并列句+强调句)

In conclusion, I personally assume that science and technology has changed our life in both positive and negative ways. While we enjoy more material affluence and convenience, we have to tolerate the contaminated environment and poor health. Maybe we should not be too optimisticabout science and technology development. (宾语从句+对比句)

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重点单词
  • contributionn. 贡献,捐款(赠)
  • productivityn. 生产率,生产能力
  • consequencen. 结果,后果
  • nonethelessadv. 尽管如此(仍然)
  • negativeadj. 否定的,负的,消极的 n. 底片,负数,否定
  • ironicallyadv. 讽刺地,说反话地
  • disagreev. 不一致,有分歧,不适应,不适宜
  • toleratevt. 容忍,忍受
  • conveniencen. 适宜,便利,便利设施,方便的时间,舒适
  • commodityn. 商品,日用品