雅思写作考官范文 G类 Task1(建议信) 第2期:college cafeteria needs some improvements
日期:2014-07-08 09:50

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写作题目

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements.
Write a letter to the college magazine. In you letter


1.explain what you like about the cafeteria

2.say what is wrong with it
3.suggest how it could be improved

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ................. ,

参考范文

Dear Sir/Madam,
I normally eat lunch at the college cafeteria because it is reasonable priced, convenient and it has a friendly atmosphere.
There are, however, a number of deficiencies which I think should be put right Firstly, although the staff try to keep the tables clean, there are not enough workers at peak times to clear their tables themselves then they have finished eating.
Unfortunately, some students do not bother to do this. Also, there are a number of students who do not wait in the queue to be served, which is very annoying for the majority of us. Finally, I think the cafeteria could have better ventilation as it gets too hot, especially in the summer.

I think it would be a good idea if more signs were put around the cafeteria asking students to put their dirty plates and cutlery on the trolleys provided and to throw away their leftovers and rubbish. Also, I think we should tell students when they are being anti-social and jumping the queue. Finally, could we please have a few windows open when things get too hot?


Yours faithfully

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重点单词
  • majorityn. 多数,大多数,多数党,多数派 n. 法定年龄
  • rubbishn. 垃圾,废物,废话 v. 贬损
  • botherv. 使恼怒,使不安,烦扰,费心 n. 烦扰,麻烦,焦急
  • cutleryn. 刀具,刀具业
  • reasonableadj. 合理的,适度的,通情达理的
  • minutesn. 会议记录,(复数)分钟
  • annoyingadj. 恼人的,讨厌的
  • convenientadj. 方便的,便利的