新东方朱瑞红:2013年2月14日雅思写作范文
日期:2013-03-04 17:13

(单词翻译:单击)

  小作文:地图题,一个农场30年的变化。

  大作文:

  Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job,but other people think they should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  写作思路:

  第一段:年轻人找工作的标准

  第二段:个人理想或信仰,个性,兴趣,价值观,工作环境

  第三段:工资,福利,稳定。因为就业的压力

  第四段:依据个人的意愿更有利于事业的发展

  In today's labour market, what kind of jobs do young people favor? While some mainly consider about some realistic issues such as initiative salary or working conditions, others may choose one simply because they like it.

  Of course it is very justified for job seekers to be realistic when facing the severe competition in employment. College graduates have little chance to be romantic but think about the starting payment, security, working hours and future promotion opportunity. In my country, many parents encourage their children to compete for a civil servant position as it is permanent for life. Other things such as personal interest or feelings have to come second. However, many young workers complain about their job of a high level of security. They tend to suffer from tediousnessand indifference.

  I personally support young people to have freedom to choose their career in the hope of enhancedjob satisfaction. They should be allowed to choose what they have interest in and feel inspired to be better each day. When a worker feel satisfied with his or her job, he or she would be self-motivated and dedicated to their career. They tend to spare little effort to achieve their workinggoal which is set clear and ambitious. Even if some jobs are not permanent, those who outperformtheir colleagues in these workplaces can also gain high degree of security.

  To conclude my argument, it is ideal to land on a job position which not only is stable but alsoignites one’s passion for work. However, there is nothing perfect in this world and especial in the employment sector. My suggestion is to give priority to personal inclination to a particular job when one is seeking for a job.

  (288 words)

  词汇拓展:

  1. Favor 偏向

  2. initiative salary= starting salary 起薪

  3. working conditions 工作条件

  4. justified 有道理的

  5. job seekers 求职者

  6. severe 严峻的

  7. complain about 抱怨

  8. promotion opportunity 提升机会

  9. compete for 争取……

  10. civil servant 公务员

  11. permanent 终身的

  12. tediousness 无聊

  13. indifference 冷淡

  14. security = safety安全

  15. in the hope of 希望

  16. enhanced= increased= higher更高的

  17. inclination 个人爱好

  18. self-motivated 自觉,主动

  19. dedicated 有奉献精神的

  20. spare little effort 不遗余力

  21. set a goal 制定目标

  22. ambitious 要求高的

  23. outperform 胜过

  24. colleague 同事

  25. ideal 理想的

  26. land on 登陆

  27. stable= secure 稳定的

  28. ignite 点燃,激起

  29. passion for 对……的热情

  30. give priority to 首先考虑

  31. job satisfaction 工作满意度

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重点单词
  • indifferencen. 不重视,无兴趣,漠不关心
  • paymentn. 支付,付款,报偿,报应
  • secureadj. 安全的,牢靠的,稳妥的 vt. 固定,获得,使
  • competevi. 竞争,对抗,比赛
  • dedicatedadj. 专注的,献身的,专用的
  • encouragevt. 鼓励,促进,支持
  • inclinationn. 倾向,意愿,倾斜度
  • complainvi. 抱怨,悲叹,控诉
  • particularadj. 特殊的,特别的,特定的,挑剔的 n. 个别项目
  • stableadj. 稳定的,安定的,可靠的 n. 马厩,马棚,一批