你写我改:BEC名师评点网友作文(3)
日期:2008-10-16 23:07

(单词翻译:单击)

  本期作文题目:
  芬利尼先生决定接受安吉拉.戈达德的邀请, 写一封接受邀请的回信,字数在120-140字左右.
  感谢戈达德女士的来信;
  对她的各项建议表示感兴趣;
  接受她请你去看戏的邀请;
  对她提同的日期表示不合适作出解释;
  建议另改日程。
  提示:写信时可注意把握行文语气的正式程度和礼貌委婉。
  Sample
  Dear Ms. Goddard:
  Thank you very much for your letter on 4th Aug.
  I feel pretty interested in the proposals that you have mentioned in your letter and so do our directors. I hope that we could have further discussion on it later on.
  I think I really love your idea of going to the theatre together next Tuesday at 8:00 p.m. Unfortunately, I'll pay a regular visit to my client on that day.
  Could it be possible for you to change the schedule? I'll be available next Thursday. I'd appreciate if you could change the arrangements.
  I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
  Sincerely yours
  网友作文一:
  Dear Ms.Angelia,
  I'm appreciated that you are very prompt in answering my letter[1] .
  It's intersting[2] what you advice in promting programe from all angles.
  Thank you for inviting me to go to the theatre at 8:00 next monday. But i will be tied up at the moment because of regular meeting. There are 3 days available for me next week which from Tue. to sat.Would[3] you mind changing the time?
  sincerely
  Philiy
  _________________________________________
  [1]Thanks for answering my letter, as reference to your letter dated ....
  [2]I'm interested in what you have proposed about the program, I hope that we can have further discussion on it.
  [3]Maybe it could be more advisable if we can change the schedule.
  网友作文二:
  To Ms. Gettad,
  It is my pleasure to receive your last letter. Thank you for it! In it, you have offered us many suggestions in various aspects. I take great interest in them. Maybe we could have a further discussion about them[1] .
  And also in that letter, you invited me to watch a movie toghter, I would accept it, for it's my great honor[2] .
  Last but not least[3] , it concerns the time that is inappropriate. I'm really sorry for that. But I suppose there must be something you have to know. Our manager was too busy with the project, dueing to unexpected issues. I hope we could reach understading on this. We will pay a visit to your company tomorrow and change the exact time.
  Wish you everything goes well.(去掉)
  Your sincerely
  Finely
  _________________________________________
  [1]整个意思表述得很清楚,只是语言方面太幼稚了。
  Thanks for your letter on 3rd, July, which gave us useful proposal on the project ongoing. We feel pretty interested in that and hope that we can have further discussion.
  [2]受汉语影响了。
  As for your invitation of watching a movie together, I'd really appreciate it if it is possible that we rearrange the timetable since I would be out of town.
  [3]这是个口语中的句子,在信件中使用不够正式。

  网友作文三:
  To: Ms Gedad
  From: Mr Fenliny
  Date: 4th August, 2008
  Subject: Reply to the invitation
  Room 204,**Road
  Minhang District
  Shanghai,http://ks.examda.com
  China (右上方)
  Thank you for your letter, Ms Gedad. We are very interested in your suggestion which[1] shown in the letter. And drama[2], I think, will be a quite good opportunity to have a further contact.
  The only little problem is the date of invitation because my schedule has been full this week. Could you check your agenda and make a change if possible? I'd like to hear your satisfied answer ASAP.
  Best wishes!
  your sincerely,
  Fenliny
  _________________________________________
  [1]Which is/was shown
  [2]改成动名词要好一些。 Attending a drama
  网友作文四:
  Dear Goddard,
  I have received the letter of Aug.7 and thank you for your letter[1] .
  I'm interested in your suggestion about our date [2] on Aug.10.I'd like to accpect your invitation to have a moive with you. I think we would have a nice day.
  Unfortunately,I need to meet my client on Aug.10,and I'm afraid that I have much work that week. Should we meet at 6.00 on Aug.14 afternoon. We could have dinner first if you're available.
  I'd like to hear you soon.[3]
  Best wishes.[4]
  Fenlini
  _________________________________________
  [1]合成一句好不好? Thanks for your letter on Aug.7th.
  [2]这是用在单身男女约会用的,咱们好像还不知道对方是否是单身哦! Appointment
  [3]I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
  [4]Sincerely yours
  网友作文五:
  Dear Angela,
  Thank you very much for your kind invitation. I'm very interested in the suggestions you mentioned about and hope to discuss with you on the details.
  I would be very pleased to enjoy your invitation for the drama. It's so kind of you.(去掉)
  Unfortunately, I have a big meeting with my boss on next Monday and i am unable to meet you on that day. Next Tuesday to Friday is possilbe for me. I would be greatful if you could tell me the suitable date for you.
  I look forward to hearing from you.
  Thanks and Best regards[1] .
  Fiona Cai
  _________________________________________
  [1]Sincerely yours

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重点单词
  • appreciatedvt. 欣赏;感激;领会;鉴别 vi. 增值;涨价
  • invitingadj. 吸引人的,诱人的 动词invite的现在分词
  • proposaln. 求婚,提议,建议
  • agendan. 议事日程
  • promptadj. 迅速的,敏捷的,立刻的 vt. 激起,促进,推
  • appreciatevt. 欣赏,感激,赏识 vt. 领会,充分意识 vi.
  • inappropriateadj. 不适当的,不相称的
  • rearrange重新整理,重新排序
  • invitationn. 邀请,招待,邀请函,引诱,招致
  • checkn. 检查,支票,账单,制止,阻止物,检验标准,方格图案