外教撰写托福范文70篇 第39篇:People with high salaries
日期:2014-09-01 14:39

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托福写作题目

托福写作题目:

Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.


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Nowadays, the annualincomes of many sports stars and film stars come to millions of dollars. Somepeople claim that their salaries are too high. Yet, in my opinion, such salariesare well deserved. They work hard to become famous, provide entertainment forus, and win honors for their countries.

First, famousathletes and entertainers make painstaking efforts to achieve fame. Fame is awonderful thing to have, but it seldom appears overnight. Famous people haveworked hard for years to achieve their fame today and they have to continuetheir good work to maintain it. For their hard work, sports and entertainingstars deserve to be generously rewarded. Unfortunately, people tend to focus onthe huge amounts of money made by them. They rarely appreciate the efforts thatathletes and entertainers have to make in order to achieve the fame that theyhave today. For example, in order to win the first place in a 100-metre dash,an athlete has to cover hundreds of mils during training. Famous stars deservetheir high salaries because they have worked hard.

Second, sports andentertaining stars provide us with good entertainment. On weekends, many of usattend a football match that includes Beckham, see a movie that star JuliaRoberts, or go to a concert that features Celine Dion. These people help usmake good use of our free time by entertaining us. As a result, we feelinspired as well as relaxed. In other word, we feel energetic again afterattending the events. We even feel that we have more to enjoy in life and havenew aspirations. For such reasons, these people are worth their high salaries.

Third, athletes andentertainers win honors for their countries. For example, after four years'hard work, many athletes win gold medals at the Olympics Games. They are ableto make millions of dollars a year after the games. Such high salaries arejustified, because these athletes have won honors for their countries in themost competitive arena and have made their people proud, something few peoplecan even dream of. This is true for entertainers as well. Many actors andactresses receive high salaries after they have won Oscars or prizes at CannesFilm Festival. These people also deserve high salaries, because they have madea name in films for their country and have made their country better known bypeople elsewhere in the world.

All in all, famous athletes and entertainers merittheir high salaries, for their hard work, entertainment they provide, and theircontribution to their country. If I had a chance, I would be a famous star whocan make millions of dollars a year.





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重点单词
  • energeticadj. 精力旺盛的,有力的,能量的
  • painstakingadj. 辛苦的,勤勉的 n. 辛苦,苦心,工夫
  • claimn. 要求,要求权;主张,断言,声称;要求物 vt. 要
  • tendv. 趋向,易于,照料,护理
  • deservedadj. 应得的;理所当然的 v. 值得;应得;应受报答
  • deservevi. 应该得到 vt. 应受,值得
  • competitiveadj. 竞争的,比赛的
  • relaxedadj. 放松的, 松懈的,随意的 relax的过去式(
  • dashv. 猛冲,猛掷,泼溅 n. 猛冲,破折号,冲,短跑
  • athleten. 运动员