2014年8月16日 托福独立写作机经预测1(豆腐)
日期:2014-08-09 17:04

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写作预测

Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People care more about public recognition than about money. Even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.

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Answer:

In our society, we work to earn money to make our life happier and make our goals accomplished. Either we try to make our life wealthy or try to seek for the public recognition; we all know that we need to work hard to earn them. For sure, many factors in this process affect our thoughts and behaviors toward this issue played in our life. Will we still work harder if we only receive public recognition without money being paid? To me, I am for the statement.
To begin with, it is a realization of one's self-actualization. Without a doubt, we all work to make money and this need makes us work harder. However, for some people, money is not everything no matter if they have a lot or do not have much. For instance, an affluent businessperson can donate money to the needy, such as orphans, medical research or education. Do they want something, especially monetary gains in return? No, they do this even though they are not paid; they receive appreciation from those being helped, they are delightful when they see patients receiving better treatment or students obtaining better education. They help people to possess a better life as they are. This is not evaluated by money and they will still work harder to make other people feel learned and hoped again during the process.
Secondly, some people target on making our world a better place to live for generation. For example, paper recycling volunteers, they work for the wholesomeness of our earth, which is much recognized by the public. They know if they contribute what individuals can do for the concept of sustainable management, they can help our earth, nature as well as our environment for a better living place, not just for themselves, but for all the people on this planet. Such public recognition is way more pivotal than the value money can bring. The public respect those people who do it merely for our environment, not for their private means. Thus, they will still work harder to keep the public recognition because it is meaningful public acknowledgement that is highlighted merited.
Undeniably, we cannot live without money and material things to support our life. Some people may think that money is the lure to make people work harder, rather than public recognition. In psychology, human beings do something for a purpose. Customarily, we do it for receiving more money in the security of our own life so we can buy luxurious cars, garments or big mansions. To some people, the demand of such desire is the way to make them work harder. Earning public recognition is just an invisible or intangible thing that exists only in one's dreams. However, for a great number of people, they still care more about public recognition over whether money is given and those people still work hard to make them feel respected, wanted and valued by the society. They simply do not do it for money, but for the happiness of all the people living in the same community. The world, after all, still needs some dreamers to make it a better place. Thus, I agree with the statement for sure.

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重点单词
  • planetn. 行星
  • statementn. 声明,陈述
  • possessvt. 持有,支配
  • merelyadv. 仅仅,只不过
  • contributevt. 捐助,投稿 vi. 投稿,贡献,是原因之一
  • recognitionn. 认出,承认,感知,知识
  • intangibleadj. 难以明了的,无形的 n. 无形的东西
  • invisibleadj. 看不见的,无形的 n. 隐形人(或物品)
  • affluentadj. 富裕的 n. 支流
  • monetaryadj. 货币的,金融的