外教撰写托福范文70篇 第10篇:Supporting the arts or athletics
日期:2014-08-02 11:01

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托福写作题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money supporting the arts than supporting athletics such as an Olympic team.


外教参考范文1

外教参考范文1:

Agree

Governments have limited resources for arts and sports funding, and that money is often misspent on things like athletic and Olympic teams. Instead, governments should focus upon spending money on the arts because the payoffs are much greater than those found in athletics.

Through their creation of the arts, some people become larger-than-life inspirations to everyone, so governments need to support these people as much as possible. Artists often serve as representatives of a nation's culture. For example, great composers and other artists, such as Beethoven, Mozart, Van Gogh, and Rembrandt, are cultural icons in their home countries, and their genius is recognized worldwide. Without funding for art schools, orchestras, operas, and plays, future icons, would have nowhere to improve their work. By providing funding for the arts, governments can ensure a steady flow of cultural icons.

People need outlets like the arts to relieve themselves from the stresses of daily like. When seeking stress relievers, many people turn to the arts for both entertainment and relaxation. My family often attends cultural events such as concerts, plays, and exhibitions at local museums, most of which are public-funded. Appreciating music and paintings really help me get relieved of the stress from my studies. Without the benefit of government funding, my family would be deprived of wonderful cultural opportunities, and I would lose some very valuable stress relievers.

Since the arts are a fundamental part of children's educations, the government must continue to provide funding for them. All children take art and music classes in schools, so they are a part of the core curriculums. I remember once that my art class took a field trip to the local art gallery where the city was sponsoring an exhibition of Renaissance paintings. I saw some of the most amazing art thanks to the generosity of our government. Without this kind of opportunity to experience the arts, my firsthand education in this field would have been lacking.

In conclusion, funding for the arts should be a priority over funding for athletics because the arts can create cultural icons, help people relieve their stress, and add to children's educations. While events like the Olympics come only every four years, the arts last forever.


外教参考范文2

外教参考范文2:

Disagree

Going to museums and looking at works of art is something I enjoy doing. But I believe that governments should concentrate on funding athletes in their quests for Olympic glory much more than they should be paying artists.

For one thing, the athletes at the Olympics represent our country, so we should support them as much as possible. By winning Olympic gold, an athlete can bring glory and honor to all of the people in the country, not just him or her.I know that I personally feel a sense of pride when someone from my country wins a gold, silver, or bronze medal. Even though I did not do anything myself, it makes me feel proud to see one of my countrymen competing and winning. For the sake of honor, it is imperative that we support our country's Olympic athletes.

The best athletes in the world compete at the Olympics, so we need to send our own country's best athletes to face them. They can only achieve victory, however, if they have enough funds to train properly. Training for the Olympics is not cheap. Teams and athletes need special facilities and equipment, and the coaches and staff members need to receive salaries for their work. Since there are few competitions throughout the year for paying customers to attend, governments need to provide the necessary money for these athletes. This will enable them to train year-round and to reach their potential.

It is also important to remember that most Olympic athletes are amateurs and therefore receive salaries. It is incumbent upon the government to fund them on behalf of the sacrifices they are making. A typical Olympic athlete spends years in training.I read an article about how many of them spend time away from their schools, friends, and families just to train for Olympic glory. Some even spend their own money, which is something that they simply should not have to do. The government should reward their sacrifices by subsidizing the costs of their training.

While the arts are important, the Olympics should take priority when it comes to funding because the team represents the nation, it requires the best training, and the athletes need to be supported for their sacrifices. Glory comes with a high price, and that is one that the government should meet.


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  • imperativen. 命令,诫命,需要,祈使语气 adj. 命令式的,急
  • typicaladj. 典型的,有代表性的,特有的,独特的
  • relievev. 减轻,救济,解除
  • geniusn. 天才,天赋
  • athleticsn. 体育运动,田径
  • fundamentaladj. 基本的,根本的,重要的 n. 基本原理,基础
  • benefitn. 利益,津贴,保险金,义卖,义演 vt. 有益于,得
  • athleten. 运动员
  • achievev. 完成,达到,实现
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