托福分类话题写作每日一练 第140期
日期:2012-12-20 15:07

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140. Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer — items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.

参考分析:

这道题相对[101]就要具体很多。不过选择比较自由,无论选哪一种都行,只要列出几个好的理由。(注意,家具也有很多种,根据不同的种类,也可以有不同的偏好)

  • 手工:可以按照特定要求制作,有特色;成本高;
  • 机械:一般批量生产,所以相对缺乏特色;成本低

相关题目:[101]

140喜欢用机器做的东西
(1)机器做的东西比较便宜
(2)机器做的东西比较耐久(DURABLE,LASTING)。
(3)机器做的东西更加好看。

Topic 140 Hand vs. machine

From my point of view, there are many factors affecting whether to choose an item made by hand or by machine. The main factor to make a judgment is whether we use the item for our daily life or for collection and decoration purposes.

For items used in our daily life, the choices we make depend on the following factors: function, form, and price. Function is the most important thing for us. If a product is beautiful, but it is not able to perform the function, it can only be called a decoration, or a piece of garbage. For example, when we buy a TV, what we really care about first it is the quality of the picture and sound, how many stations it can receive, and whether it can be connected easily to the VCR and DVD player at home. The second factor that affects our choice of a product for daily use is its form. Is the TV too big, too small, or too ugly? Will it fit into the living room? Will it be compatible with the colors of other appliances and the furniture? The third factor we may consider is the price. Even if we are very happy with the item, there is no meaning if we cannot afford it.

So, in our daily life, there is really no difference whether our clothes or furniture are made by hand or made by machine. It just doesn't matter as long as they can perform their function. For items for collection and decoration, it is a completely different story. Ancient tools and historical artifacts have more market and educational value than modern day massively produced products, and traditional handicrafts make good tourist souvenirs and beautiful decoration for the house. Therefore, when it comes to items for collection and decoration, I would definitely choose items made by hand, because they are just so special.

In conclusion, depending on different items and different uses, I will make different choices.

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重点单词
  • functionn. 功能,函数,职务,重大聚会 vi. 运行,起作用
  • conclusionn. 结论
  • traditionaladj. 传统的
  • durableadj. 耐用持久的 n. (复)耐用品
  • factorn. 因素,因子 vt. 把 ... 因素包括进去 vi
  • lastingadj. 永久的,永恒的 动词last的现在分词
  • qualityn. 品质,特质,才能 adj. 高品质的
  • specificadj. 特殊的,明确的,具有特效的 n. 特效药,特性
  • collectionn. 收集,收取,聚集,收藏品,募捐
  • performv. 执行,运转,举行,表演