托福分类话题写作每日一练 第137期
日期:2012-12-17 15:44

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137. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

参考分析:

倾向于认为高中生应该服从学校安排。

  • 依据教育的课程安排是有一定科学道理的,学一些没必要的课程占用太多时间,对学生未来考大学可能不利。
  • 而相应地,学校也有责任随着时代的发展,不停地改进课程安排。让学生们可以得到真正有用的教育。

137、不同意。高中应当让学生学很多课程
(1)学习很多课程是未来学习和工作的需要
(2)学习很多课程能够让学生交更多的朋友
(3)学习很多课程能够让学生体会到很多乐趣。

Topic 137 Should students choose subjects?

There are lots of debates among parents, educators and students on the issue of whether or not to allow students to study the courses that students want to study. It seems to be reasonable to many people that allowing students to choose the course they want can inspire their learning interest and find their talents on certain subjects and pursue further development. But if we take a deeper consideration, it is not difficult to make the judgment that to ensure the students have a comprehensive knowledge domain is the main objective of high school education, therefore I disagree with the idea of allowing students to study any courses that they want to study.

As we all know, the main purpose of school education is to provide a systematic education to all students. In order to let students be educated in all aspects, the curriculums have to be researched and predefined by professional education institute. If we allow students to select course, we cannot guarantee all necessary courses to be covered in the regular class time. Moreover, both parents and educators believe that high school education shall provide each student a fundamental knowledge base that is essential to their future development in the society. It is the school's responsibility to enforce the rule and make sure that all the necessary knowledge is to be taught.

On the other hand, we may consider introducing some optional courses to the high school curriculums so the students can choose some of the courses within the limitation of a big syllabus. For example, for an art classes, the school can offer music and painting courses and each student can choose either one of them according to his or her personal interest. But this is not to say that the students should have the freedom to choose any course.

In conclusion, high school education is a standardized process in which major courses shall be predefined and we need to make sure students are educated in all necessary fields and build a foundation for the development after high school.

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重点单词
  • disagreev. 不一致,有分歧,不适应,不适宜
  • comprehensiveadj. 综合的,广泛的,理解的
  • conclusionn. 结论
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  • optionaladj. 任选的
  • applicationn. 应用; 申请; 专心 n. 应用软件程序
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  • specificadj. 特殊的,明确的,具有特效的 n. 特效药,特性
  • reasonableadj. 合理的,适度的,通情达理的