托福分类话题写作每日一练 第133期
日期:2012-12-12 00:07

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133. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Aperson's childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are themost important years of a person's life. Use specific reasons and examples tosupport your answer.

参考分析:

不能同意,the most important是修饰词。

参见:范文

133、不同意
(1)儿童在前12岁的时候还没有学到能够谋生的知识
(2)儿童在前12岁的时候还没有交到最好的朋友
(3)儿童在前12岁的时候还没有尝到最重要的人生经历

Topic 133 Arechildhood years most important in life?

A person's childhood years are indeed themost important years of his life and I agree with this statement.

The initial years of childhood are the timewhen a person learns a lot about himself and his family and the society. Achild's mind is impressionable and he imbibes values and behavior that he getsto see around him. So the role of his family and school is of utmostimportance.

It has been seen that children who get thelove and support of their parents and teachers in their childhood turn out bemature and emotionally balanced teenagers and adults. On the other hand, if welook at the childhood of criminals and other anti social elements, we will findthat most of them have been through tough times as children. They were deprivedof proper care and upbringing. Delinquents also have a history of abuse intheir childhood many a times.

Children are always inquisitive and willingto learn. When they are provided a stimulating environment in which they candevelop their talents and learn to enjoy their work, they become good citizenswho are an asset to the nation. Family is the most important institution in a child'sformative years because parents are children's role models. Children develop theirethics, moral values and temperament in tune with what they see in theirparents and elder siblings. The type of personality that a child develops isdifficult to change later.

So I firmly believe that childhood is avital part of a person's life that plays an important role in shaping hisfuture.

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重点单词
  • statementn. 声明,陈述
  • stimulatingadj. 刺激的,令人兴奋的 动词stimulate的现
  • inquisitiveadj. 好奇的,好追根究底的,求知欲强的
  • institutionn. 机构,制度,创立
  • impressionableadj. 易受影响的
  • initialn. (词)首字母 adj. 开始的,最初的,字首的 v
  • environmentn. 环境,外界
  • specificadj. 特殊的,明确的,具有特效的 n. 特效药,特性
  • disagreev. 不一致,有分歧,不适应,不适宜
  • tunen. 曲调,调子,和谐,协调,调整 vt. 调整,为 .