破解剑桥雅思大作文的秘密之剑6篇
日期:2014-09-25 16:46

(单词翻译:单击)

  随着出国留学热潮的继续涌动,出国留学人数日益飙升,尤其是考生们的考试水平的显著提升,都对剑桥考试委员会提出了挑战,导致他们不得不更加兢兢业业、绞尽脑汁、穷其心智地制造各种题目和题型来测试辛勤的烤鸭,所以特此,我也兢兢业业、绞尽脑汁、竭尽全力地为大家破解一下雅思大作文的秘密,让我们也学学孙子“知己知彼,百战不殆”。
  剑6(4套)
  C6T1
  Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
  To what extent do you agree or disagree?
  常规题目,文章结构多样,取决于观点的个数以及观点之间的逻辑关系。具体内容请参见剑6中 7.5分考官范文。
  范文参考步骤:
  1. 弄清开头段的每一句话的功能
  第一句Nowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television or on the streets.主题词advertisement交代背景。
  第二句Some people think that the advertising boosts the sales of goods and it encourages people to buy things unnecessarily. 提干观点改写。
  第三句This argument may be true.交代作者观点,并暗示下文结构,有同意用不同意。
  第四句In my country, many advertising companies produce advertisements with famous and popular actors or singers. People, especially youngsters, buy goods that their favourite singer advertise, although they do not really need the products.举例说明广告对年轻人购物的诱导性,但一般我们不建议在开头段举例子,最好放到主体段中去论证,以免本来就不多的例子充实了开头段却冷落了主体段。(注意:该句话中有语法错误,看看聪明的你能否找到并予以改正。)
  2. 弄清主体段之间的逻辑关系。
  第二段主题句:Also, on the television screen, a product may look gorgeous and good quality.
  第三段主题句:On the other hand, there are various aspects against these arguments.
  第四段主题句:In addition, as there should be a limited amount of disposable income consumers are
  able to spend, people try to allocate their budgets.
  结尾:In conclusion, as customers have their own strong opinions and standard of good quality goods, it is better to leave them to make their own decision in buy goods.(又有语法错误咯,聪明的你有没有发觉?)
  总之,段落之间的逻辑取决于观点之间的逻辑关系。所以在审题列提纲的部分就应该准备好这些结构上的安排。
  3. 弄清段落内部句子之间的逻辑关系。(以also这一段为例)
  Also, on the television screen, a product may look gorgeous and good quality. As a result of it, people often buy goods without enough consideration. Consumers may not actually need it but they buy goods impulsively soon after they watch the advertising. Furthermore, as many customers buy a particular product due to its advertising campaign, the other people may be affected by the trend, even if the product is not of the real needs of the society.
  很多同学在写主体段落的时候也会有意安排一些逻辑连接词,但是不代表有逻辑连接词就一定是有逻辑,而一定是思维流畅的时候逻辑才流畅,逻辑流畅了才会有逻辑连接词。所以要提升表达的逻辑,建议孩子们根据自己的母语,选择论述性比较强的文章,多看多分析,增强自己的逻辑思维能力,之后再训练英语表达能力,也许文章逻辑能更加顺畅一些,而非胡乱堆砌貌合神离的逻辑连接词。
  C6T2
  Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
  C6T3
  Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
  C6T4
  Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
  纵观这三道题目,你会发现都是“Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.”记得在剑5的分析中我们得出的结论是:考试题型的多样性决定文章结构的多样性。而到了剑6,discuss类型问法基本固定下来,而且文章的结构也多以4段式为主,即“开头——观点A——观点B——我的观点”。(但是当你习惯了某种模式的时候,你也就该是时候提高警惕啦,具体陈述请期待我对剑9大作文的分析吧。)
  小结:
  剑6一共4篇大作文例题,其中包含了一篇传统的agree类型和多大三篇的要求一致的discuss类型,考官似乎在跟我们传达这样一个讯息:agree类型仍为主流题型,discuss类型的问法趋于固定,并且考生一定要重视discuss类型的题目和文章结构,尤其是它与agree类型的差异,即discuss必须讨论双方,而agree则相对灵活。

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重点单词
  • extentn. 广度,宽度,长度,大小,范围,范围,程度 n. [
  • producen. 产品,农作物 vt. 生产,提出,引起,分娩,制片
  • conclusionn. 结论
  • trendn. 趋势,倾向,方位 vi. 倾向,转向
  • allocatevt. 分派,分配,分配额
  • additionn. 增加,附加物,加法
  • screenn. 屏,幕,银幕,屏风 v. 放映,选拔,掩蔽,遮蔽
  • considerationn. 考虑,体贴,考虑因素,敬重,意见 n. 报酬
  • disposableadj. 用完即可丢弃的,可任意处理的 n. 用完即可丢
  • advertisev. 登广告,为 ... 做广告,宣传