雅思写作辅导:范文118篇(含小作文)part 10
日期:2011-02-08 10:53

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【写作话题】
Is it nature or nurture that plays a major role in the development of personality? What's your opinion?

【写作范文】

范文8

  For centuries,people have heatedly debated the problem that what runs a more significant position in characteristic and development.

  At first glance,it would seem that nature is the crucial factor. Closerexamination reveals,however,that nurture makes the determinative effect.Personally,I side with the later opinion.Some reasons as follows can demonstrate my viewpoint.

  Most important,elder generation's way of actionun fluences much on children's psychology.Because of the small age,kids have little understandings about the condition and they always intimate what their parents do.It is frequent to find that the sons possess the same gestures of walking or eating with the fathers.Meanwhile children are using their parebns' way to think of and deal with matters out of habit.

  What is more,just as Edison's best-known saying goes:"Genius is one percent inspiration and 99 percent perspiration." Everyone is no exception.The heritage does give out benefit; however, its effect is too limited.Man must make it through hardwork and proper cultivation.

  In ancient China,Fang Zhongyong, concidered as a child prodigy, had a talented ablity of poem creation.Unfortunatly,he did not acquire a well education,which leaded to the lost of teputatuon ten years later.

  Last but not least, superior postnatal nurture can bting a promissing development to youngsterds.Numerous aspects o fchildren's personality are formed after the borth such as the view of world and value.The nurture just serves as these points as it shows a correct direction to the youngs and tutors them.

  From what has been mentioned above, we can safely come to the definitive conclusion that nurture is the most critical ingredient for personality and personal growth.

  范文9

  nowaday,variety of language and culture has been lost rapidly,as a matter of fact,the speed of language and culture dissapear is as fast as the speed of development of society.i would rather to give the main reasons for it and explore the good solution to this phenomenon.

  firstly,its undeniable that the development of new technology and science contribute the ressesion of traditional culture.microwave,for example,save my mother time.throw the prepared and forzen food into it,we will have the dinner within a few minutes.but we will not have the delicious food cooked by my mother.gone foreveris the traditional cooking.

  secontly,as the economic globalization is being carried out,the traditional culture is being under the threat of assimilation.especailly in chinese depress areas,as the western culture with investment floods into these nations,.the young people became obbessed with the fresh culture so that they miss very much their own culture.however,culture just like a mirror which reflect the value of one country,how can these cultures exist if the young people who are the hope of one country are tired of learning it?

  in addition,nowaday the young people whose mother tongue is not english became crazy about learning english on the ground that english well can ensure them a decent job,a better life.they spent a lot of time in studying english so that they dont have spare time to develop and enrich their own language.so,its not surpring that many a language,only spoken by few people,disappear one by one in the mordern society.

  To sum up,the distinct culture make our world colourful .it is notonly belong to their own country,it also belong to the world.let us cherich our traditonal culture,for it embody the very costoms and culture,which sustain our family ,our friendship and our spirital life!

  范文10

  some people think the natural gift play the major role in the children's development.in contrast,other think the nurture is more important than nature .personally,its more advisale to choose the latter view than the former one.

  to begin with the Einstein's bestknown saying:the gunius is 1% inspiration ,and 99% prespiration.even Einstein who is one of most wisest people in the world also have to think and study for months before he fomulate the famouse relativity of theory.in addition to it,there is also a countexample to support my point.in Ming dynasty of china,there was a 3-year-old boy who was genius at creating a perfect poem within 3 mins.but his father did not provide him opportunity to develop his ability,instead,he frequatly took his son to the banquet hold by the rich to perform how to make a quict poem in order to earn money.when this genius child grew up,his tallents dissappeared just for lacking of right education.so ,i fomulate the two important factors for the development of children's personality.

  firstlly,the success of child would not seperated from round education.as the hebert spenser's famouse saying:education is has for it abject the information of charactors.its reported by scientists that the disble man also can performs as well as the nomal people if they are nurtured and educated.the parents as the first teacher and teachers should give proper instruction and correct guidance to their development.

  secondlly,indiviial great efforts is indispensable.the many politican and statemans gain success though the great efforts when they were young.there is also countexample.the most successful people may not be the most cleverest people.according to the studies conducted among the group who was the same class before 10 years,those whose average point is in the middle 50 % ,all became the richers and managers.while few of the young people who is upper 10 % became the bosses or excutives.studies show people who do not word hard only depend on their intelligence will be far from the sucess.

  therefore,the kid is the seed,the nurture is the fertile soil in which the seed can grow well.among all ingredients for children's development,round education is very important,moreover,individial offort is also indispensable!

  范文11

  The contentious issue in the domain of sociology in the past mainly concentrated on postnatal nurture and congenital element still has been steeped in controversy nowadays. The key point of it is, which factor has top priority in personal growth and progress. On the strength of compelling and convincing research and evidence, I prefer the former. This essay will outline the following reasons.

  In the first place, environment and parents enlightenment play utmost and crucial roles in children’s personalities and further development. When they are young, they often unconsciously imitate parents’ behaviors. As prevailing Chinese slang says, “Better unborn than unbred”, which connotes that parents should strengthen the supervision over and education of kids. After accepting education in school, their identities and ideas are deeply affected by diverse instruction system and even distinguishing courses. For instance, students of science are apt at logical thinking, while students of arts are inclined to thinking in image. Granted that it happens to identical twins, their behaviors are not genetic because life has presented them with different opportunities.

  In the second place, one with innate intellect uncertainly becomes a genius insomuch as his success owes much to his capabilities and arduous efforts. Take an instance of Charlotte Bronte’s brother who was quite bright during his childhood. Only did he depend on his superior intellect, so that neglected his study. Finally he became an idle person, while his sister became a famous author as a result of hard study. Even Albert Einstein said, “A genius is that kind of person with 99 percent diligence plus 1 percent intelligence.” Apparently, his success is not so much by talent as by strenuous work.

  In conclusion, no one can choose his nature, but one can be successful after striving for himself and being well educated. Moreover, no one can be triumphant only relying on his genes. Namely, nurture passes nature.

  范文12

  V111 Children - Nature or Nurture?

  Which one has deeper influence on molding children’s personalities and their development nature or nurture?

  In certain respects, children are the same all over the world. But when they grow up, they become quite different. What has caused such considerable changes? I believe nurture plays the crucial role in personality and development of a child. In another word, the circumstances surrounding the child are more important to form its character.

  As an old saying remarked, ‘No man is born wise or learned’. Had nobody taught him, a man would even not be able to count from 1 to 10, no matter how talented he were. In fact, a nascent infant to who has scarcely given birth, in certain aspects, is just the same as a kitten being no aware of so-called character. Its nature is to cry for food when it feels hungry, or cry for release when it feels uncomfortable. That is that. The true story of ‘wolf-child’ can be the best evidence.

  On the other hand, the parents, teachers, as well as other people around a child, are the main builders who develop its personality. Learning from the circumstances, the child forms its character and concepts of the world. People always say ‘the best horse needs breeding, and the aptest child needs teaching.’ Without correct guidance, a clear conscience can even go bad. For instance, a father is a deep drug addict, and in most cases, his son starts this dangerous experience very early, by reason of smoky air he has breathed since his childhood. Such situation is not rare. On the contrary, we often hear similar news from media.

  As you can tell from my analysis, among all factors affecting the growth of children, nurture is the crucial one, which is much more important than the nature or any other else.

  范文13

  Nature or nurture, which one has major influence on our personality and development? This issue has been widely debated in our country nowadays. As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to support the standpoint that nurture plays a more crucial role in youngster’s development.

  To begin with, scientific research has already proved that the intelligence quotient(IQ) we were born with is not differ from each other too much. We have to admit that the so-called whiz-kids could be found are actually seldom. If we want to lead to any success, we need to rely on postnatal education and self-struggle which are the decisive factors. For example, Edison was regarded as a fool in his primary school. However, he got uneaqualed achievement by his own efforts.

  In the second place, children’s limited natural gift will disappear soon if his/her nurture can not support it sufficient. Only can we say that the advantageous intelligence is a helpful condition to achievement, but the advantages will not last for long. There is Chinese fable: a boy called zy had some talents in poetry, so his father continuous take him to attend feast to boast his gift instead of bringing him to school, several years latter, zy have not any intelligence in composing poems any more. Therefore, we can find how important does the parental education and studying environment are!

  Finally, the concept for success given by Einstein also indicates the essential effect of education and hardworking. He said: success is equal to 99% of diligence plus only 1% of genius. From his notion, we can easily find that the diligence is the indispensable element for people’s accomplishments.

  From all mentioned above, we can safely come to a conclusion that only education and industry can mould people to be excellent and outstanding, merely depend on

  So-called nature gifts are absolutely deficiency.

  范文14

  There is a dispute over what plays a chief role in one’s personality and development. Some maintain that it is concluded by the characteristic people born with, whereas others are confident that it defers to the experiences people have had in the life. For my part, I tend to share the latter point of view, and I would like to give two major reasons in the following.

  On one hand, wealth and material status have an import effect on people’s personality. According to Maslow’s Theory, basic needs is human being’s primary requirement. Without solving the basic demand for food and clothes, people’s character is vulnerable to be ruined and can hardly develop in other spheres. For example, there were twins born in a poor countryside. One of them was adopted by a rich relative and lived in a???? metropolis, but the other stayed in village. Thirty years later, the urban son grew up into a prosperous professional, while the rural one was uneducated and made a hard life. It is different material condition that contributes to this contrast.

  On the other hand, education, particularly the education from one’s childhood to adolescence, has a final say on his development. Children are too young to distinguish good from bad. They ought to be taken under the guidance of parents and teachers. Sensible ideas and decent behaviors lead them to become moral persons. Something evil, otherwise, such as violent films and drugs, make them stray from the right way. Herewith, people with excellent development are usually well educated.

  To sum up, diverse contributing factors can be identified, nevertheless, I still insist that acquired experiences have much more influence on people’s personality and development. What we must do is making sure that the positive ones are encouraged and the negative ones are eliminated as far as possible.

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重点单词
  • certainadj. 确定的,必然的,特定的 pron. 某几个,某
  • confidentadj. 自信的,有信心的,有把握的 adj. 易
  • idleadj. 无目的的,无聊的; 懒惰的,闲散的; 无根据的
  • fangn. 尖牙
  • intelligencen. 理解力,智力 n. 情报,情报工作,情报机关
  • banquetn. 宴会 vi. 宴请 vt. 宴会,设宴
  • tendv. 趋向,易于,照料,护理
  • convincingadj. 使人信服的,有力的,令人心悦诚服的 vbl.
  • threatn. 威胁,凶兆 vt. 威胁, 恐吓
  • strengthenv. 加强,变坚固