GMAT句子改错知识点(初级):保持比较的平行
日期:2014-07-27 21:39

(单词翻译:单击)

知识点
比较必须是逻辑上平行。也就是说,必须比较同一类的事情。
◆ Frank’s build, LIKE his brother, is broad and muscular.

上面的例句中用Frank’s build 和 his brother 进行比较,这在逻辑意义上不平行。所以正确的应该是:

◆ Frank’s build, LIKE his brother’s, is broad and muscular. 或者:

◆ Frank, LIKE his brother, has a broad and muscular build.

上面的例子中我们可以使用that 来代替build ,而如果是复数的话就要用those 来替换:

◆ Frank’s toes, LIKE THOSE of his brother, are short and hairy.

比较也需要结构上平行,也就是说相似的语法结构:

◆ I like to run through forests more than I enjoy walking through crowds.

上面的例子中run through forests 和walking through crowds 两个比较对象并不平行。To run 作为不定式,而walking 则是作为一个名词来使用,所以正确的可以写成:

◆ I like running through forests MORE THAN walking through crowds.

试题
Heating-oil prices are expected to be higher this year than last because refiners are paying about $5 a barrel more for crude oil than they were last year.

A. Heating-oil prices are expected to be higher this year than last because refiners are paying about $5 a barrel more for crude oil than they were
B. Heating-oil prices are expected to rise higher this year over last because refiners pay about $5 a barrel for crude oil more than they did
C. Expectations are for heating-oil prices to be higher this year than last year's because refiners are paying about $5 a barrel for crude oil more than they did
D. It is the expectation that heating-oil prices will be higher for this year over last because refiners are paying about $5 a barrel more for crude oil now than what they were
E. It is expected that heating-oil prices will rise higher this year than last year's because refiners pay about $5 a barrel for crude oil more than they did
试题
正确答案:A
参考解释:
A 正确,比较对象平行
B 比较级固定搭配用higher than,不用over; more的位置不能随意改变,应该紧跟barral
C this year 和last year's 不平行;did 和 are 不对等;more的位置不能随意改变,应该紧跟barral;Expectations are for heating-oil prices 不够简洁
D It is the expectation that 啰嗦,能够用动词表达的不要用名词; 比较级固定搭配用higher than,不用over; now错误的修饰了oil; what多余,此处比较的是两个动作,不是名词性短语;第一个for多余
E It is expected that 啰嗦;this year 和last year's 不平行;more的位置不能随意改变,应该紧跟barral

看完句子,发现than 存在this year 和 last year 付钱问题,所以发现they 后面的动词要用be动词,与are paying 平行。所以BCE 错了。
接着看D than后面有个what they were what 多余了,前面是refiners
所以A

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重点单词
  • frankadj. 坦白的,直率的,真诚的 vt. 免费邮寄,使自
  • expectationn. 期待,期望
  • muscularadj. 肌肉的,肌肉发达的