英语六级满分作文精讲 第74期:许多人为电脑利大于弊 你怎样认为
日期:2017-12-09 13:16

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六级作文范文和结构分析

cet6六级级作文范文:
Some people say that the computer is more of a menace than a blessing. What do you think?
许多人为电脑利大于弊,你怎样认为?
The computer is a sign of the era, which has brought and is bringing about a tremendous change in our lifestyle. The view that certain people maintain that it is more of a menace than a blessing seems ridiculous and completely out of place in a world that has learnt to enjoy and use the computer.
Before the invention of the computer, nearly everything was slow. Data processing was slow, typing on the typewriter was tedious, accounting was done by hand. It was the computer that sped up all these daily office affairs and freed people from repeated drudgeries.
The probable reason that the computer is a menace is derived from the fact that there are people who have lost their jobs because the computer has made them redundant. True, a small portion of people may have lost their jobs because they cannot and will not use the computer; however, most companies and work units where computers have replaced people do not just retrench workers. In stead, they go through elaborate programmes to retrain the staff.
Anotherr eason for looking at the computer as a menace is perhaps due to the fact that it makes people waste time playing games. This is a ridiculous accusation, as time could just as well be wasted watching silly tv programmes. In addition, playing games is interactive and is something that one chooses to do, it is not compulsory. Therefore, to call the computer a menace is groundless.
To conclude, the above are just part of my argument, but I think I have made it clear that the computer is a blessing instead of a menace. However, there is still enough space for counter-argument.

cet6六级作文结构分析:
计算机是时代的标志
题中的论点不合适
计算机发明之前后
原因分析
导致有人失业
玩游戏
结论
与题中论点相反
欢迎辩论


六级作文内容分析+万能句型

cet6六级作文内容分析:
本文是一篇议论文。作者在第一段中已开门见山表示反对这一论点, 并在第二段中作进一步论证。第三、四两段是作者对这一论点的分析, 指出可能的原因。在结论段中作者重申自己的论点并欢迎辩论。

cet6六级作文万能句型:
more of... than... 与其说⋯⋯不如说⋯⋯
menace n. 威胁
blessing n. 幸事, 祝福
sign of the era 时代的标志
bring about 引起
lifestyle n. 生活方式
maintain a view 持一种观点
ridiculous a. 可笑的
out of place 不合适的, 不恰当的
data processing 数据处理
type v. 打字
typewriter n. 打字机
tedious a. 沉闷的, 使人厌烦的
accounting n. 会计
by hand 手工操作
speed up 加速
daily office affairs 办公室的日常事务
fr ee people from 使人们摆脱
repeated drudgeries 重复的单调乏味的工作
de rive from 来自于
made them r edundant 使他们显得多余
retrench v. 减少, 紧缩
go through elaborate programme to ret rain the staff 仔细考虑重新培训员工的项目
accusation n. 控告
just as well 同样
interactive a. 相互作用的
choose to + v. 愿意去⋯⋯
compulsory a. 强迫的
groundless a. 无根据的
to conclude 总结起来说
still enough space for counter-argument 仍有足够的辩论余地

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