英语六级满分作文精讲 第72期:大城市中发展高层建筑
日期:2017-12-07 19:18

(单词翻译:单击)

六级作文范文和结构分析

cet6六级级作文范文:
high-rise buildings in big cities
大城市中发展高层建筑
Modernization and urbanization bring both benefits and problems. In order to solve the problem of housing, high- rise buildings have been and are being put up in ever greater numbers in more and more big cities.
High- rise buildings have their advantages and disadvantages, of course. in urban areas where land is expensive, they take up less space. Some people say that high-rise buildings can give a city striking beauty. Some buildings are apartments, which can hou se hundreds of families under one roof . on the othe r hand , high-rise buildings may be dange rous . what if there is a fir e or an ear thquake ? what if power and water ar e in s hor t s upply ? in addition, high-rise buildings/blocks may not be suitable for children and old people.
To conclude, it goes without saying that high- rise building s are necessary, but their number should be limited. At the same time, effective measures must be taken to solve such problems as the supply of water and power.

cet6六级作文结构分析:
modernization and urbanization — high-rise buildings
advantages
less space
city's appea rance mor e beautiful
house more families
disadvantages
maybe dangerous
power and water in short supply
inconvenience for old people and children
conclusion
number should be limited
problemss hould be solved


六级作文内容分析+万能句型

cet6六级作文内容分析:
本文是一篇简单的议论文, 文章首先表明在大城市中发展高层建筑是必然趋势, 然后客观地分析了高层建筑的利弊, 最后自然地得出结论“ 层建筑要建但应控制数量并克服其不足”。学习本文时应多注意过渡词的使用和三段式划分。本文为一篇较典型的四级作文。

cet6六级作文万能句型:
urbanization n. 城市化
problem of housing 住房问题
put up 建立
take up less space 占地少
house... families under one roof 容纳⋯⋯家同住一楼
what if 倘使⋯⋯会怎样
ea rthquake n. 地震
power n. 电力
in short supply 短缺, 供应不足
it goes without saying that.... 不用说⋯⋯

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