2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋
日期:2014-07-03 13:40

(单词翻译:单击)

作文真题

It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。


参考范文


Every coin has two sides. Putting all your eggs in one basket, likely, has both advantages and disadvantages. Yet, in my opinion, the disadvantages of putting your eggs in one basket far outweigh its advantages. Thus, it is never too careful to always have plan B when we cope with important events.
Nobody can know what is going to happen in the future. When unexpected accidents happened, you would find yourself in a desperate situation, losing everything you have. Putting all you have in one thing equals to putting all the risks and pressures together. That’s why we need to think about all the possible risks and prepare extra plans ahead before we make decisions on important events. In other words, we must have different plans and preparations for fear of undesirable results.

In conclusion, it is unadvisable to put all eggs in only one basket. That’s because this may give rise to unaffordable and unexpected consequences which might make you disappointed and annoyed. Therefore, I assert that we should have alternative choices to assure everything goes well.

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题解:“把所有鸡蛋放在一个篮子里是不明智的。”

本题难度中上,讨论风险与机会的关系,以及减少风险的方法,较抽象。

文章可采取三段式。首段简单阐述话题含义。主体部分重点论述“把所有鸡蛋放在一个篮子里”可能带来的风险。由于话题较抽象,此处可用具体的事例论述,证明在有一定风险的情况下,人们不应该将所有的希望都集中在同一个解决方案中,而是应该有备用方案,以减少风险。结论部分重述主题。

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重点单词
  • conclusionn. 结论
  • assertvt. 主张,声明,断言
  • unexpectedadj. 想不到的,意外的
  • annoyedadj. 恼怒的;烦闷的 v. 使烦恼;打扰(annoy
  • unwiseadj. 不聪明的,愚笨的
  • desperateadj. 绝望的,不顾一切的
  • assurevt. 使确信,使放心,确保
  • disappointedadj. 失望的
  • alternativeadj. 两者择一的; 供选择的; 非主流的 n. 替换