剑桥BEC中级真题集第四辑test 1:写作部分
日期:2011-05-24 10:20

(单词翻译:单击)

WRITING 45 minutes
  PART ONE
  · You are organising a meeting to discuss possible cuts to your department's budget.
  · Write an email to all staff in your department:
  · giving them the date of the meeting
  · explaining why some cuts have to be made
  · saying why it is important for all staff to attend.
  · Write 40-50 words.

  PART TWO
  · The retail company you work for is considering installing a TV system in its store to give customers information on products and services while they shop. You have seen an advertisement for a company which provides this type of system.
  · Look at the information below, on. which you have already made some handwritten notes.
  · Then, using all your handwritten notes, write a letter to Chris Taylor at TVInfoSystems.
  · Write 120-140 words.

范文:
  Part 1
  Sample A

  Band 2
  Apart from the fact that one of the content points has not been addressed, the answer contains frequent errors which are distracting, and which have a negative impact on the reader.

  Band 4
  The answer contains all the necessary information,yet is concise, and the language used is generally accurate. Overall, the impression on the reader is positive.
  Part 2

  Band 1
  Due to misinterpretation of the task, the answer contains irrelevant information and the reader is not adequately informed. Whilst generally being organised satisfactorily, with an adequate range of grammar and vocabulary, there are several errors.

  Band 5
  The candidate's answer is effectively organised,covers all the important information clearly and contains a wide range of vocabulary and structures. There are few errors, and language is well controlled and natural sounding. The overall effect on the reader is very positive.

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重点单词
  • samplen. 样品,样本 vt. 采样,取样 adj. 样
  • rangen. 范围,行列,射程,山脉,一系列 v. 排列,归类于
  • informedadj. 见多识广的 v. 通告,告发 vbl. 通告,
  • conciseadj. 简明的,简要的
  • minutesn. 会议记录,(复数)分钟
  • retailn. 零售 vt. 零售,传述 adv. 以零售形式
  • adequateadj. 足够的,适当的,能胜任的
  • impactn. 冲击(力), 冲突,影响(力) vt. 挤入,压紧
  • irrelevantadj. 不恰当的,无关系的,不相干的
  • frequentadj. 经常的,频繁的 vt. 常到,常去