地道美语听力播客:论文反馈
日期:2012-09-04 15:54

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Xica:I just got my paper back from Professor Rodriguez and it's all marked up.
西卡:我刚从罗德里格斯教授那拿回论文,上面全是被批改的记号KJjYWSU*J~|0AA*TT|
Lucas:Let me see. It doesn't look too bad. This is a draft, right? His note at the top says to make revisions before handing in a final version. He's trying to help you get a better grade.
卢卡斯:让我看看HRJ%xnT;QJ.UirR*。看起来没那么差啊,1Mx1h~yD~。这只是草稿,对吗?他在顶端批注道,修改后上交最终版本gjz#[J%BiK~yy=。他是在帮你取得更高的分数(z1sRO8mn(
Xica:Maybe, but there's nothing he likes about the essay. Look at all of those comments in the margins. He underlined the entire introduction and wrote “run-on sentence” next to it.
西卡:或许吧,但是他根本就不喜欢这篇论文2be!Qu*^@I。你看空白处的这些评论Yq61t8)1Nb。他在整段介绍下面都画上横线,并在旁边写道“流水句”U2NajZQFh=
Lucas:That's easy to fix, and it is a run-on sentence, you know.
卢卡斯:这很好修改啊,你也知道,它确实是流水句-7A]OLZmp~4^R|p,S
Xica:And in the body, he wrote that I had no transitions and that my arguments weren't well supported.
西卡:在正文部分,他写道因为没有过渡句,所以无法很好地支撑论据qj*TM,!U_AH(Xh2Y
Lucas:Well, transitions are easy to put in and you just need to cite a few more sources—that's all.
卢卡斯:是的,过渡段很容易加进去,你只需要再引用一些文献就好了Hv!c#R@Li~V&thbdvkBX
Xica:Yeah, but that's not all. Next to the conclusion, he wrote that I didn't properly summarize my main points. See what I mean? There's nothing he likes about this essay.
西卡:对,但这还不够0Q*cfOjEpS]UEh_=7Y。在结论处他批道:没有恰当地总结主要观点LDhd*-WB#(Ih~WR9v%。明白我说的吗?他根本就不喜欢这篇论文6-~otRq8V+eai8y=n
Lucas:I think you should take the constructive criticism as it's meant—to help you.
卢卡斯:我认为你应该吸取这些批评,因为这对你有益无害md*)#%ONchD|nWOPq
Xica:It's easy for you to say. You're done with college. It's kind of demoralizing to get your paper back all marked up.
西卡:说起来容易L]X1,OJw;bXW;*Zli0WK。你已经大学毕业了C6V8%2W3p2*9。如果返还的论文上全是批改,这会让人很气馁b;.J&(ik5X
Lucas:True, but you forget that I have my own battle wounds—lots of them!
卢卡斯:确实,不要忘了我也是久经沙场,浑身是伤了!

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上期答案

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Quiz:Choose the right answer.
Henry was walking through the forest, and he jumped out of his skin when
a.he saw many trees were cut down
b.his friend told a funny joke
c.a snake fell on his head

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答案:c

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重点单词
  • fell动词fall的过去式 n. 兽皮 vt. 砍伐,击倒 a
  • summarizev. 概述,摘要而言
  • draftn. 草稿,草图,汇票,徵兵 vt. 起草,征兵,选秀
  • citevt. 引用,引证,举(例)
  • conclusionn. 结论
  • constructiveadj. 建设性的,构造上的,作图的